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poor, lovely symphony,
you've fallen in love with a shipwreck
and are doomed to be dragged out into her sea;
you're just a boy, drowning in the saltiness
of her bitter tears - shed to stain her ink-smudged misery -
and i know you taste her pain
as if it were your own.
random drabble from a couple nights ago.. i think it's kinda cliche :shrug:
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MaidenStar Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It might be cliche, but your word choice is really nice and descriptive.
(And personally, I love using blockquotes as well. =D)
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silverthorne-studios Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw thank you c:
Haha I just like it 'cuz I think it looks cool ^^;
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moonlight1186 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
This is really cool :P
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silverthorne-studios Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! c:
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moonlight1186 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
Np
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Student Writer
Nice stuff, although I don't really think the block quote is necessary. 
Although edging on the cliche side, I would say that your word choice is still quite pretty :3
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silverthorne-studios Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You know, when I use the block quote thing, it's pretty much just because I think it looks cool ^^; What is a block quote supposed to even be?
And thank you, I'm glad you think so! I was kind of hesitant to post it because of the clichey-ness but in the end decided it couldn't hurt c:
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silverthorne-studios Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh, I get what you mean.. I think I'll keep it though (:

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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student Writer
Fair enough.

xP 'Tis fine 
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silverthorne-studios Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Okey dokey :P
Have a wonderful day c;
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